वक़्त की क़ैद में; ज़िन्दगी है मगर... चन्द घड़ियाँ यही हैं जो आज़ाद हैं....
Monday, December 7, 2009
रुबाई -- (२)
रिवाजों के शहर में एक खुशबू बो ही जायेगी। मोहब्बत धौंस के चंगुल में ज़िद्दी हो ही जायेगी॥ सितम तू लाख कर ले टस से मस वो हो नहीं सकती पुकारे बांसुरी कान्हा की; राधा तो ही जायेगी॥
Is Rochak Sujhaav ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya Yogesh Sahab.
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A poet and Dreamer by heart.... who incidentally works on Excel sheets to stay alive....
May be someday, my dreams will have madness strong enough to break free from this 'double life'... I have nothing more to say...
By the way, all the poems that you would find on this blog are my original compositions. The only reason why I have put them here is to save them from getting lost with each losing diary... Kisi Shayar ne kaha hai - "Hazaaron Sher mere so gaye Kaagaz ki kabron mein / Ajab MAA hoon koi bachcha mera zindaa nahiin rahta".... So, here I am, putting them all on this blog hoping that the "Virtual world is safer"....
Takhallus (Pen Name) --- KAAFIR
E Mail Id: vishalgaurav2@gmail.com
Mobile Number: 9702004599
antim pankti ko kuchh is tarah sanwaren ho sake to
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bahut umda likha hai .
Is Rochak Sujhaav ke Liye Bahut Bahut Shukriya Yogesh Sahab.
ReplyDeleteChunki Main Is “**Kaafiya + Radeef Combination” (HO HI JAAYEGI) ka istemaal Doosri Pankti mein Kar chukka hoon, Isiliye Chauthi Pankti mein Isko Dohraane mein Mujhe Thodi Reservation hai.
(**Contextual Liberty lete Huye Ghazal ki Shabdaavali ka Upyog kar raha hoon)
Nevertheless, Am Really Grateful on Your Feedback. Thanks Again.
शानदार अभिव्यक्ति!!
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